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Ryan replied to the topic A Dream of Valiance, Origins of the Lunar Crusade: Nass'Quelar Serrok in the forum Published Articles 11 years, 3 months ago
This is much better. Apart from a spelling error here or there, it's fine. Thanks much.
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Gene replied to the topic A Dream of Valiance, Origins of the Lunar Crusade: Nass'Quelar Serrok in the forum Published Articles 11 years, 3 months ago
I'm still working on it, here is the second draft doubling the length of the article to the present day. If it is not up to par to print, I'll continue to work on it.In the jewel that is the Kingdom of Sekhem, there were three siblings. There was a girl, who danced in dreams as her mother did, a boy whose fiery passions allowed him to m…[Read more]
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Gene replied to the topic A Dream of Valiance, Origins of the Lunar Crusade: Nass'Quelar Serrok in the forum Published Articles 11 years, 3 months ago
I'll do that then.
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Ryan replied to the topic A Dream of Valiance, Origins of the Lunar Crusade: Nass'Quelar Serrok in the forum Published Articles 11 years, 3 months ago
Clary has the right idea here, I feel like you touch on it, but don't really go too much into it. It just feels kinda empty without going into detail like that. I didn't really gain much from the article other than “We used to go out drinking with the guards and tell stories at night, so we called ourselves the lunar crusade” and then it's s…[Read more]
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Gene replied to the topic A Dream of Valiance, Origins of the Lunar Crusade: Nass'Quelar Serrok in the forum Published Articles 11 years, 3 months ago
Clary, that's exactly what I was going for. This is part one of a two part. This is just the foundation of the crusade. The walls and structure are what it is in New Calendale.
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Clary replied to the topic A Dream of Valiance, Origins of the Lunar Crusade: Nass'Quelar Serrok in the forum Published Articles 11 years, 3 months ago
I do like, but it makes the crusaders seem insubstantial. Are they just a group that believes in things or are they a group that gives protection and fights for people. The siblings, which embody the idea of the crusaders, don't seem to do much in the story. I feel like it cuts off abruptly. Like you hook the reader in, but you got to give them a…[Read more]
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Gene replied to the topic A Dream of Valiance, Origins of the Lunar Crusade: Nass'Quelar Serrok in the forum Published Articles 11 years, 3 months ago
Help me to understand, I'm a little confused by what you are trying to go for. You want me to be more descriptive, but less poetic? Is it a problem with the third person narrative?A good chunk of my background is why my character is the driving force behind the Lunar Crusade. Between what I wrote and my character's arrival in New Calendale, a…[Read more]
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Ryan replied to the topic A Dream of Valiance, Origins of the Lunar Crusade: Nass'Quelar Serrok in the forum Published Articles 11 years, 3 months ago
This is a good start, I think. But I feel like it could be a bit more descriptive. I feel it's kinda vague and a bit out there. It may be best to have less poetry and more reality. I honestly would like to hear a description of how things started, but this seems a bit vague. I like the concept though.
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Onyx TigerEye replied to the topic Attn: Shannon in the forum Editors 11 years, 4 months ago
Excellent. Looking forward to tomorrow! :)Also, Shannon, please tell me your new computer will be running Win 7 instead of 8………….. Otherwise, call them and change it before it's toooooo laaaaaaaate……..
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Aaron R replied to the topic Bravo in the forum June 2013 11 years, 4 months ago
Looks awesome and its really easy to comment on the PELs when they have their own thread. Nicely done!
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Scott replied to the topic Bravo in the forum June 2013 11 years, 4 months ago
Thanks! Coded the whole thing by hand so it would be custom tailored to suit our purposes. We've got a lot of other stuff in the works that Mike's wanted done for years that different people kept dropping the ball on, heh. Also, thanks again for redoing many of the PEL questions; as you can see, we implemented most if not all of them.
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Jared replied to the topic [Archived] Plot: Duel of the Fates in the forum Archived/Concluded Plots 11 years, 4 months ago
For June?
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Dielon replied to the topic [Archived] Plot: Duel of the Fates in the forum Archived/Concluded Plots 11 years, 6 months ago
In order to keep with the schedule outlined, I'd like to run Retaliative Interception on Friday night, and then Guard Under Duress at Court Saturday.
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Dielon replied to the topic [Archived] Plot: Duel of the Fates in the forum Archived/Concluded Plots 11 years, 6 months ago
JP did not attend, and there are no other none guards Lord Thynne trusts for this mission. Pushed to next event.
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Dielon replied to the topic [Archived] Plot: Duel of the Fates in the forum Archived/Concluded Plots 11 years, 7 months ago
JP took option A. The plot will continue in April with this.For April: Retaliative Inerception- This plot will happen regardless of what happens with the prior interception. This is because either A. A player will tell Lord Thynne about the interception or B. The Guard who delivers the exact instructions for Threat from the South from General…[Read more]
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Dielon replied to the topic [Archived] Plot: Duel of the Fates in the forum Archived/Concluded Plots 11 years, 7 months ago
Do you want the courier to be out the same time Micha is or do you want 2 different times?
I'd prefer the courier go out at a set time which Micha would know and then inform the spies of. Perhaps an hour or two after Micha goes out.
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Jared replied to the topic [Archived] Plot: Duel of the Fates in the forum Archived/Concluded Plots 11 years, 7 months ago
Do you want the courier to be out the same time Micha is or do you want 2 different times?
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Mike replied to the topic [Archived] Plot: Duel of the Fates in the forum Archived/Concluded Plots 11 years, 7 months ago
Sweet.
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Dielon replied to the topic [Archived] Plot: Duel of the Fates in the forum Archived/Concluded Plots 11 years, 7 months ago
This plot has been altered since Stroker can no longer attend. Lord Thynne and Lord Morrigan(Stroker) have both spoken to some townsfolk briefly about each-other. For March: Correspondence Interception- Lord Morrigan wishes to know what Alcot is up to in New Calendale. His son Micha Morrigan will be the primary Anti-hero for this plot from now on.…[Read more]
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Mike replied to the topic [Archived] Plot: Duel of the Fates in the forum Archived/Concluded Plots 11 years, 7 months ago
Cool deal. It's an awesome idea, hate to see it scrapped.As you and I talked about I have been wanting to get the political intrigue plots going again, now that it seems players are actually interested. I mean who knows, even sons of nobles have been known to vanish from time to time.
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